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letter to a friend about moving to a new country

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Dear Emma, I am sorry I have not been writing to you lately, I am sure you would understand once I tell you all my recent adventures. As you know I have moved to Canada last month, and ever since I have been trying to catch my breath in a incredibly hectic daily life. You will be surprised to find out that I am writing to you in a bus on my way to a job interview, as this is the only free time I have today. If I delay this further, I am afraid I will not have the chance to write to you for another eternity. The weather is extremely cold, as one would imagine. However, I am enjoying wearing all the stylish winter clothing we got together prior to my travel. For the last few weeks, I have been house hunting. Luckily, I found a beautiful house by the forest that comes with an excellent heating system. I have also been job hunting and you will be proud to know that I have landed three interviews last week. One of which is at Howard’s company, so I will be pursuing my dream career as a game designer. Tell me how your studies are going. I am Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards,
Dear Emma,

I am sorry I have not been writing to you lately, I am sure you would understand once I
tell
you all my recent adventures.

As you know I have
moved
to Canada last month, and ever since I have been trying to catch my breath in
a
incredibly
hectic daily life. You will
be surprised
to find out that I am writing to you in a bus on my way to a job interview, as this is the
only
free time I have
today
. If I delay this
further
, I am afraid I will not have the chance to write to you for another eternity.

The weather is
extremely
cold
, as one would imagine.
However
, I am enjoying wearing all the stylish winter clothing we
got
together prior to my travel. For the last few weeks, I have been
house
hunting. Luckily, I found a
beautiful
house
by the forest that
comes
with an excellent heating system.

I have
also
been job hunting and you will be proud to know that I have landed three interviews last week. One of which is at Howard’s
company
,
so
I will be pursuing my dream career as a game designer.

Tell
me how your studies are going. I am Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
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IELTS letter letter to a friend about moving to a new country

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
217 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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