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TP Hung yen, Hung yen, Vietnam September, 9th, 2021 Dear Lauren, I am very glad to hear that you will stay with my family in 2 weeks. We live in our own house with three bedrooms, therefore, I can share my room with you. You asked me about my family rules. There are three important things that we must follow. The first and the foremost one is all of us have to help around with the housework and other home duties. Because my parents are very busy with their work, both my brother and me have to share homework and the chores equally. On the weekends, all family have to join hands to clean three-floor and the furniture. Another crucial rule in my family is that we mustn’t swear in front of the elderly. My parents are strict and they think that swear is the expression of naughty children. The last vital rule is that we are not allowed to go out in the late evening, I believe that my parents are right because our residential area is quiet deserted and some crimes happened in there, therefore, you should go out at night to avoid bad things happening, If you have any questions, please tell me. We will try our best to make you feel comfortable during your stay. Best wishes, Linh

TP Hung yen, Hung yen, Vietnam

September, 9th, 2021

Dear Lauren,

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad to hear that you will stay with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 in 2 weeks. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 with three bedrooms, therefore
, I can share my room with you. You asked me about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
. There are three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 follow.

The first
 and the foremost one is all of us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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help
 around with the housework and other home duties. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 my parents are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy with their work, both my brother and me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 share homework and the chores equally
. On the weekends, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 hands to clean three-floor and the furniture.

Another crucial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 is that we mustn’t swear in front of the elderly. My parents are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).strict, and
strict and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that swear is the expression of naughty children.

The last vital This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 is that we are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to go out in the late evening, I believe that my parents are right This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 our residential area is quiet deserted and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 crimes happened in there, therefore
, you should go out at night to avoid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 things happening,

If you have any questions, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me. We will try our best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 you feel comfortable during your stay.

Best wishes,

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