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You left a bag at a flight at you you want it back

You left a bag at a flight at you you want it back 2x8eo

Dear Sir or Madam, Last Saturday I attended London flight with number 21344, I had two carry on with me and when I got to my hotel I realized that I had left one of them under my flight chair. It is a small Gucci bag and it contains one red makeup bag, two sandwiches and one little present with green packaging. Although there is no valuable and crucial property in the bag I really need its content since I am at London for a vacation and I need to have my stuffs with me and have no alternative. I would really appreciate it if you can return back my bag, and I am willing to come to the airport in order to receive it, if you have no delivery service. Here is my hotel number 092213123 and my hotel room number is 213. If you respond me through email that would work too. But please let me know the result as soon as possible Kind regards, Diba Kalantari

Dear Sir or Madam,

Last Saturday I attended London flight with number 21344, I had The expression 'two carry' seems incorrect in this context.to carrytwo carries
two carry
 on with me and when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to my hotel I realized that I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 one of them under my flight chair.

It is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 Gucci You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 and it contains one red makeup You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
, two sandwiches and one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 present with green packaging.

Although there is no valuable and crucial property in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 I really
 need its content since I am at London for a vacation and I need to have my stuffs with me and have no alternative. I would really
 appreciate it if you can Consider using "return".return
return back
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
, and I am willing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the airport in order to receive it, if you have no delivery service.

Here is my hotel number 092213123 and my hotel room number is 213. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you respond me through email that would work too. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know the result as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpossible.possible!possible?possible:possible,possible;
possible


Kind regards,

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Diba
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Kalantari