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Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work. 0aNpO
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to request an enquiry about the voluntary position at the museum. It is a summary about why I am interested in this voluntary work and how my skills can contribute to the museum. To be frank, I am having a lot of recreational time since it has been a summer break after my final exam. Although I could waste my time partying, I became interested in volunteering for the museum after I heard from my friend Jim about his volunteering experiences there. He mentioned to me that as art majored students, the museum is a perfect place to learn about the historical ancient arts. A lot of visitors are mostly painters and those who have enormous interests in arts, therefore, it is definitely priceless place for us to have discussions with them occasionally. As an arts majored student, I think I will be familiar in most of the arts in the museum and will probably be a natural in explaining historical facts to the wonderers. I ought to confess I have enormous interest in part-time job at the museum. Due to the fact that I am in summer holidays, I will be available in a day notice. I will be looking forward to your reply.
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is to request an
enquiry
about the voluntary position at the
museum
. It is a summary about why I
am interested
in this voluntary work and how my
skills
can contribute to the museum.

To be frank, I am having
a lot of
recreational time since it has been a summer break after my final exam. Although I could waste my time partying, I became interested in volunteering for the
museum
after I heard from my friend Jim about his volunteering experiences there. He mentioned to me that as
art
majored students, the
museum
is a perfect place to learn about the historical ancient
arts
.
A lot of
visitors are
mostly
painters and those who have enormous interests in
arts
,
therefore
, it is definitely priceless place for us to have discussions with them
occasionally
.

As an
arts
majored student, I
think
I will be familiar in most of the
arts
in the
museum
and will
probably
be a natural in explaining historical facts to the
wonderers
.

I ought to confess I have enormous interest in part-time job at the
museum
. Due to the fact that I am in summer holidays, I will be available in a day notice. I will be looking forward to your reply.
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IELTS letter Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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