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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to contribute my knowledge for the article 'The book that influenced me the most'. I am an ardent follower of your magazine and obliged to share my insights in the readers section. The book which influenced me the most last year was "The Brave" written by Rachna Bisht. It is about the stories of the Param-Vir Chakra winners. This book is a significant tribute to all the winners who sacrificed their lives for our nation by showing intensive patriotism. It covers the background story before coming to the heroism of the individuals. The sequences visualise the trauma faced by our heros for saving millions of lives, and this will surely bring tears to our readers. The readers will really love to read this book based on my review. Also, this would be a boon to the children as it will inculcate patriotism at a very young age. In addition to that, adults will also be thankful for the immense sacrifice done by these soldiers. I am looking forward to publish this as part of the article. Yours faithfully, Shathish Raj
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to contribute my knowledge for the article 'The
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book
that influenced me the most'.

I am an ardent follower of your magazine and obliged to share my insights in the readers section. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
which influenced me the most last year was
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The Brave
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written by
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Rachna
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Bisht
. It is about the stories of the
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Param-Vir
Chakra winners. This
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book
is a significant tribute to all the winners who sacrificed their
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lives
for our nation by showing intensive patriotism. It covers the background story
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before
coming to the heroism of the individuals. The sequences
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visualise
the trauma faced by our
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heros
for saving millions of
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lives
, and this will
surely
bring tears to our readers.

The readers will
really
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love
to read this
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book
based on my review.
Also
, this would be a boon to the children as it will inculcate patriotism at a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
young age.
In addition
to that, adults will
also
be thankful for the immense sacrifice done by these soldiers.

I am looking forward
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to publish
this as part of the article.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Shathish
Raj
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IELTS letter editor of magazine about book influenced you most

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