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letter to editor of newspaper wrote about town centre

letter to editor of newspaper wrote about town centre K3Jp9
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about a recent article published in your daily on town centres. Firsty, I have to appreciate the consistent quality of the news and articles in your newspaper for several years. I am an ardent buyer of your newspaper and read most of the articles. However, I was disappointed by the recent article on "Copied Town centre architecture" in the regional tabloid. I accept that the paragraph on the history of the motive to build them are legit. I understand that you have researched a lot for producing exact details. In contrast, the other paragraphs were misleading. It states that all the town centres in India are of same architectural designs and used similar raw materials to build, which is not the case. For instance, the town centre in Kolkata was made of clay and are circular in shape, whereas the one in Mumbai is triangular and made of steel. This hampers the reputation of the quality of the country and your brand. I would like to detail on these, if you are willing to come to my place. I can provide assistance with relevant details as I have all the evidences of the history in the museum. However, I would like you to mention about this error as soon as possible in the main page. This is to acknowledge the reader about the mistake committed.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about a recent
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article
published in your daily on
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town
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centres
.

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Firsty
, I
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have to
appreciate the consistent quality of the news and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
in your newspaper for several years. I am an ardent buyer of your newspaper and read most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
.
However
, I
was disappointed
by the recent
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article
on
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"
Copied
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Town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
architecture
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"
in the regional tabloid. I accept that the paragraph on the history of the motive to build them are legit. I understand that you have researched a lot for producing exact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.

In contrast
, the other paragraphs were misleading. It states that all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
in India are of same architectural designs and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
similar raw materials to build, which is not the case.
For instance
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
in Kolkata
was made
of clay and are
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
circular in shape
, whereas the one in Mumbai is triangular and made of steel. This hampers the reputation of the quality of the country and your brand.

I would like to detail on these, if you are willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my place. I can provide assistance with relevant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
as I have all the evidences of the history in the museum.
However
, I would like you to
Did you mean simply "mention this"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about this
error as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible in the main page. This is to acknowledge the reader about the mistake committed.
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IELTS letter letter to editor of newspaper wrote about town centre

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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