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Hi, there! I’m starting to learn English. I know you’ve studied it for some time. Can you give me some advice on how to improve English? Where did you first take the course? What do you do to practice your English skills like listening, speaking, reading and writing every day? Have you got any difficulties when you learn English? (..) Write an email responding to Hiroshi. You should write at least 120 words. You do not need to include your name or your addresses.

Hi, there! I’m starting to learn English. I know you’ve studied it for some time. Can you give me some advice on how to improve English? Where did you first take the course? What do you do to practice your English skills like listening, speaking, reading and writing every day? Have you got any difficulties when you learn English? (. . ) Write an email responding to Hiroshi. You do not need to include your name or your addresses. m8GXO
Dear Hiroshi, How are you doing? I am writing to response to your letter asking for advice about how I learn English. To be honest, I have just started learning English for 6 months. And HQ is the first center that I take the coure. This place really helped me to improve significantly my language skills. I strongly believe that the primary element of success is practice. My daily English practice strategy is to practice listening and taking notes through audio and news on every morning, learn new lexical item on a regular basis and revise it at the end of the day. My biggest difficulty while learning English is the shortage of environment to practice. However, I overcame it by participating in forums and making friends with foreign friends. Therefore, you should surround yourself in English. Put yourself in an all English speaking environment where you can learn passively. Well, that’s all for now. I hope that your English will be better. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions. Best wishes, Diem My
Dear Hiroshi,

How are you doing? I am writing to response to your letter asking for advice about how I learn English.

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practice
listening and taking notes through audio and news on every morning, learn new lexical item on a regular basis and revise it at the
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end
of the day. My biggest difficulty while learning English is the shortage of environment to
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practice
.
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, I overcame it by participating in forums and making friends with foreign friends.
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English speaking
environment where you can learn
passively
.

Well, that’s all for
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now
. I hope that your English will be better.
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do not hesitate to contact me if you have any
further
questions.

Best wishes,

Diem My
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IELTS letter Hi, there! I’m starting to learn English. I know you’ve studied it for some time. Can you give me some advice on how to improve English? Where did you first take the course? What do you do to practice your English skills like listening, speaking, reading and writing every day? Have you got any difficulties when you learn English? (. . ) Write an email responding to Hiroshi. You do not need to include your name or your addresses.

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  American English
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179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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