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In my formal letter......

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Dear Madam. I am writing to apply for the post of your guide advertised on your website. I strongly believe, I full fill at the necessary criteria and much hope that you will think my application. I have lived in this village all my life and learn about the places of interest and their history. And I am interested in learn foreign languages. I have already learnt two languages. They are English and Spanish. I can speak that languages. I want enter the job for guide. On the contrary, I am going to speak about somewhere's history for tourists. I have always been interested in history and over the past few years, I have regulary participated in activities at the mountain. Recently, I have been working as a guide at a mountain in the daytime consequently, I have experience of dealing with overseas tourists and I enjoy talking to them. I do hope you will consider me for this post and I look forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely.
Dear Madam. I am writing to apply for the post of your guide advertised on your website. I
strongly
believe, I full fill at the necessary criteria and much hope that you will
think
my application.
I
have
lived
in this village all my life and learn about the places of interest and their history. And I
am interested
in learn foreign languages. I have already
learnt
two languages. They are English and Spanish. I can speak that languages. I
want enter
the job for guide.
On the contrary
, I am going to speak about somewhere's history for tourists. I have always
been interested
in history and over the past few years, I have
regulary
participated in activities at the mountain. Recently, I have been working as a guide at a mountain in the daytime
consequently
, I have experience of dealing with overseas tourists and I enjoy talking to them. I do hope you will consider me for this post and I look forward to hearing from you. Your
sincerely
.
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IELTS letter In my formal letter......

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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