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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this. P0BX
Dear Editor, I am writing to inform you regarding untrue figure of population facing poverty in Hyderabad, published in your newspaper on 17-03-2021. As I am a responsible citizen of Hyderabad from past two decades and I also worked closely with statistical officer for survey on population that came to the end in previous year. I am aware of the mistake that, it is printed 29% of city population are under poverty in your article in page no. 2, Its 19% of the population who are below the poverty line. I would request you to please, project the correct figures in following day's newspaper. Despites its a small correction, it may lead to bad impression about the city to other states and neighborhood countries as well. I am attaching the copy of reports related to poverty data with this letter. yours faithfully, Dheeraj.
Dear Editor, I am writing to inform you regarding untrue figure of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
facing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
in Hyderabad, published in your newspaper on 17-03-2021. As I am a responsible citizen of Hyderabad from past two decades and I
also
worked
closely
with statistical officer for survey on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
that came to the
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end
in previous year. I am aware of the mistake that, it
is printed
29% of city
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population
are under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
in your article in page no. 2, Its 19% of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
who are below the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
line. I would request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
, project the correct figures in following day's newspaper. Despites
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its
a
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small
correction, it may lead to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
impression about the city to other states and neighborhood countries
as well
. I am attaching the copy of reports related to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poverty
data with this letter.

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yours
faithfully
, Dheeraj.
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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
143 words
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