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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this. pjNm
I am writing this to provide feedback about the article about XYZ city insights published in TOI newspaper on 26/10/2020 under exploring new Town/City section. As a resident of the city, I would like to express my gratitude for appraising the city by writing about it in your esteemed newspaper. The information about city monuments, temples and other tourist attraction was well captured. Besides tourist attractions, We would like to appreciate the way our town is projected as one of the future investment opportunity with maximum returns. Overall article was excellent and well structured but unfortunately, there was a small glitch observed, instead of mentioning that our town has a majority of white-collar employees it was mentioned as blue-collar. I may be overthinking but it might impact the future investments in the field of education and retail. This is because institutes or malls will not find enough staff and clients for their operation.
I am writing this to provide feedback about the article about XYZ city insights published in
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TOI
newspaper on 26/10/2020 under exploring new Town/City section.

As a resident of the city, I would like to express my gratitude for appraising the city by writing about it in your esteemed newspaper.

The information about city monuments, temples and other tourist attraction was well captured.
Besides
tourist attractions, We would like to appreciate the way our town
is projected
as one of the future investment opportunity with maximum returns.

Overall
article was excellent and
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well structured
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
unfortunately, there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
glitch observed,
instead
of mentioning that our town has a majority of white-collar employees it
was mentioned
as blue-collar. I may be overthinking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it might impact the future investments in the field of education and retail. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
institutes or malls will not find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
staff and clients for their operation.

IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Letter
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153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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