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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You heard that a sports centre would be closed. Write a letter to the manage In your letter, you should: • tell how you heard about the news • say what your opinion is about this • explain how it impacts on your life

You heard that a sports centre would be closed. Write a letter to the manage In your letter, you should: • tell how you heard about the news • say what your opinion is about this • explain how it impacts on your life eEx0p
Dear Sir, I am disheartened to read today's "The Dawn" newspaper regarding shutting down the only sports club, "The Rising Youth" It has been an alarming story! What is worse, we can't collect funds and earn the government sponsorship to run an Athlete's center that has produced the World-class players that shined all over the globe. Indeed, since I grew young, I have always seen adolescents dreaming, to receive admission in this state-of-the-art facility. Thus, I can imagine the sports dying therein renowned city with the fall of this historical heritage club. It's a dire need to raise awareness and stands on our own feet by a stable financial economical model to lessen dependency and regroup together. I would be obliged to you if you could support my campaign? By the way, the decision has jolted emotions and deep down hurt me financially, as well as other colleagues. Above all, protests are initiating today in front of the Karachi press club until we aren't able to snatch our rights. It's now and never! Your prompt and favorable attention to my opinion would be highly appreciated. Best wishes, Syed Hassan Masood
Dear Sir,

I
am disheartened
to read
today
's
"
The Dawn
"
newspaper regarding shutting down the
only
sports club,
"
The Rising Youth
"
It has been an alarming story! What is worse, we can't collect funds and earn the
government
sponsorship to run an Athlete's center that has produced the World-
class
players that shined all over the globe.

Indeed
, since I grew young, I have always
seen
adolescents dreaming, to receive admission in this state-of-the-art facility.
Thus
, I can imagine the sports dying therein renowned city with the fall of this historical heritage club. It's a dire need to raise awareness and stands on our
own
feet by a stable financial economical model to lessen dependency and regroup together.

I would
be obliged
to you if you could support my campaign? By the way, the decision has jolted emotions and deep down hurt me
financially
,
as well
as other colleagues.
Above all
, protests are initiating
today
in front of the Karachi press club until we aren't able to snatch our rights. It's
now
and
never
!

Your prompt and favorable attention to my opinion would be
highly
appreciated.

Best wishes,

Syed
Hassan
Masood
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IELTS letter You heard that a sports centre would be closed. Write a letter to the manage In your letter, you should: • tell how you heard about the news • say what your opinion is about this • explain how it impacts on your life

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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