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Application letter for theme nursing

Application letter for theme nursing nRpkE
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of nurse, which I saw advertised in local tv "CNN". I am forty-five years aged and I have a Bachelor's degree in nursing and fifteen years experience. I am calm and patient professional with good healthcare skills. I am presently working as a nurse in the town hospital where I have been for the ten years. As a proactive person I able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. Faithfully yours, Nelly Collins
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to apply for the position of nurse, which I
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a proactive person
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able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
. I am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualified for this job. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position.

Faithfully
yours,
Nelly
Collins
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IELTS letter Application letter for theme nursing

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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