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You have traveled by air had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem - ask how this issue can be solved

You have traveled by air had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem - ask how this issue can be solved 0AE1G
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to let you know that I had a very unpleasant flight while travelling through your airline, more precisely, the morning flight of Monday 26 March 2019 destination India. While the comfort on the plane was excellent, the services on-board were very unprofessional. I hope you will consider my complaint favourably. Let me explain the situation. The trouble started when food started to be served. Prior to that, everything was great; I had a cosy window seat and was being served refreshments whenever I requested. Upon receiving my lunch, however, I was horrified to find that I was served prawns. While booking my tickets with your company staff, I clearly mentioned that I am allergic to seafood and made a specific demand for a vegetarian meal. As such, the cabin crew did not have any additional meal to allocate to me and therefore I had to travel an 8 hour flight without consuming anything. Would you kindly offer me a compensation? I would much prefer a partial refund of the fare price or an upgrade the next time I travel by your airline. Furthermore, I would like your company to take strict actions against your officer for the mistake which could have cost me serious health issues. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Alex
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to
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let
you know that I had a
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very
unpleasant flight while travelling through your airline, more
precisely
, the morning flight of
The date 26 March 2019 is not a Monday, but a Tuesday.
Monday 26 March 2019
destination India. While the comfort on the
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plane
was excellent, the services on-board were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
unprofessional. I hope you will consider my complaint
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favourably
.

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Let
me
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explain
the situation. The trouble
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started
when food
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started
to
be served
. Prior to that, everything was great; I had a
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cosy
window seat and was
being served
refreshments whenever I requested. Upon receiving my lunch,
however
, I
was horrified
to find that I
was served
prawns. While booking my tickets with your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
staff, I
clearly
mentioned that I am allergic to seafood and made a specific demand for a vegetarian meal. As such, the cabin crew did not have any additional meal to allocate to me and
therefore
I had to travel an
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "8-hour"
8 hour
flight without consuming anything.

Would you kindly offer me a compensation? I would much prefer a partial refund of the fare price or an upgrade the
next
time I travel by your airline.
Furthermore
, I would like your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to take strict actions against your officer for the mistake which could have cost me serious health issues.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Alex
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IELTS letter You have traveled by air had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem - ask how this issue can be solved

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  American English
7 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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