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you are applying for a bursary program.How to write this letter properly ?

you are applying for a bursary program. How to write this letter properly? 15AgA

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to my interest in applying for a bursary program to study at your institution. Let me explain my situation. I graduated from the mechanical engineering department last year, and I am eager to enrol post-graduation program which is related to advanced aerodynamics for plane designing. This is because I completed my internship in the year before graduation in a plane manufacturing plant, and I decided to opt for a career pathway in terms of aerodynamics. Your reputed university specialized in aerospace technology, and most of the employees of the plane manufacturing plant graduated from this university which gives postgraduate students to chance to work with high-tech equipment to enhance both their theoretical and practical abilities. Would you kindly consider my bursary application due to high tuition fees that are far beyond my family budget? , my GPA is 4 out of 4, and I graduated as a merit student who has a desire to study in your institution. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully

Dear Sir or Madam,

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with regards to
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 manufacturing plant graduated from this university which gives postgraduate students to chance to work with high-tech equipment to enhance both their theoretical and practical abilities.

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 my GPA is 4 out of 4, and I graduated as a merit student who has a desire to study in your institution. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully