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Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Mona, I'm writing to you in regard of me taking courses in your city, Jeddah and the course are on a huge demand. As you know, I have enrolled in a degree in my city Riyadh, and imagine that it's my senior year! ! I have like 12 credits to complete my degree. I am studying software engineering and learning a lot of programming and web development. It takes all of my days trying to attend classes and catching up with what I learned every day. So I am always sunk under my midterms and projects and its been a while since I contacted you and I really don’t have any friends in Jeddah accept you. For that I'm asking for your help on how to contact the colleges of computer science in Jeddah to ask them if they can provide me with the course that I need My love, Shahd.
Dear Mona,

I'm writing to you in regard of me taking courses in your city,
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Jeddah
and the course are on a huge demand.

As you know, I have enrolled in a degree in my city Riyadh, and imagine that it's my senior year! ! I have like 12 credits to complete my degree. I am studying software engineering and learning
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a lot of
programming and web development. It takes all of my days trying to attend classes and catching up with what I learned every day.
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So
I am always sunk under my midterms and projects and
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its
been a while since I contacted you and I
really
don’t have any friends in
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Jeddah
accept you.

For that I'm asking for your
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help
on how to contact the colleges of computer science in
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Jeddah
to ask them if they can provide me with the course that I need

My
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love
,
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Shahd
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IELTS letter Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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