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You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities

You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities 0ApOl
Dear Stephanie, It’s been a while since we last met, a year to be precise - before the pandemic hit us. I am planning to visit Ontario next week, for a project that I have been assigned and was wondering why not extend the trip through weekend so that we can spend the weekend together - just like old times! I understand, due to the current situation there are a lot of restrictions in order to travel and so we won’t get a chance to go out and have a blast like we always do, but we can always sit back, relax and have a good time talking about each other’s lives. I have so much to talk to you about, since a lot of things have changed in this last one year, but I think I should leave that for the next weekend. So, what do you say? Do let me know so that I can plan my trip accordingly. Lots of love, Arjun
Dear Stephanie,

It’s been a while since we last met, a year to be precise
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before
the pandemic hit us.

I am planning to visit Ontario
next
week, for a project that I have
been assigned
and was wondering why not extend the trip through weekend
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so
that we can spend the weekend together
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-
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just
like
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old
times!

I understand, due to the
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current
situation there are
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a lot of
restrictions in order to
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travel and
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so
we won’t
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get
a chance to go out and have a blast like we always do,
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but
we can always sit back, relax and have a
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good
time talking about each other’s
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lives
.
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I
have
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so
much to talk to you about, since
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a lot of
things have
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changed
in this last one year,
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but
I
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think
I should
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leave
that for the
next
weekend.
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So
, what do you say? Do
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let
me know
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so
that I can plan my trip
accordingly
.

Lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
,

Arjun

IELTS letter You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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