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You have seen an advertisement on the internet for a job working in Line Service Technician company. introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with the advertisement for Line Service Technician on www. indeed. com. I have a bachelor's degree as engineer at aircraft building. I have worked as a Line and base Service Mechanic on Boeing 737 and Airbus A320 for 3. 5 years. I have a training certificate for maintenance of Boeing 737. Finally, I was a trainee pilot before the pandemic. I have a good appearance and well groomed. I have worked a lot in public service as a cashier, deliveryman, and seller. I am ready to work any schedule and extra hours. I look forward to discussing the Line Service Technician position and my qualifications with you in more detail. I am available to talk at your convenience. Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Aleksandr Starukhin
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in connection with the advertisement for Line
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Technician on
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www
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
indeed
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
. I have a bachelor's degree as engineer at aircraft building.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have worked as a Line and base
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Mechanic on Boeing 737 and Airbus A320 for 3. 5 years. I have a training certificate for maintenance of Boeing 737.
Finally
, I was a trainee pilot
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the pandemic.

I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
appearance and well groomed. I have worked a lot in public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
as a cashier, deliveryman, and seller.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am ready to work any schedule and extra hours.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to discussing the Line
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Service
Technician position and my qualifications with you in more detail.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am available to talk at your convenience.

Thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much for your time and consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aleksandr
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Starukhin
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement on the internet for a job working in Line Service Technician company. introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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  American English
7 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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