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You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre.

You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. Mad6

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request you check my thing which I left in your hotel room. My name is Mayur Doriwala and I stayed in your hotel on the 10th to 15th February. I was in room number 201. I left my digital camera and Greece watch in hotel room when I arrived home. I want to inform you digital camera even in a brown leather bag which has the cock my name and please watch left on the dressing table which is next to cupboard. Could you please check for me? Because of both things are very costly. I would like to inform I got both things from my parents on my last birthday hence, both things are very important for me. My day bought digital camera from London, when he went to business tour in January. And wrist watch is my grandfather's sign both things are very valuable for me. I am extremely grateful if you contact me. You can send my things by two pay parcel and you don't have to pay for this kind of courier service. I would be grateful if you do for me and I would like to give my address and phone number. I am sincerely looking for your response extremely fast. Yours faithfully, Aarthi

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my thing which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in your hotel room.

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.MayorMayer
Mayur
Possible spelling mistake found.DorsalCornwallGorillaDorianDrywallDouala
Doriwala
 and I stayed in your hotel on the 10th to 15th February. I was in room number 201. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my digital camera and Greece This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 in hotel room when I arrived home. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to inform you digital camera even in a brown leather bag which has the cock my name and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 on the dressing table which is next
 to cupboard. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 for me? “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 of both things are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 costly.

I would like to inform I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 both things from my parents on my last birthday hence
, both things are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me. My day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 digital camera from London, when he went to business tour in January. And wrist This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 is my grandfather's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 both things are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 valuable for me.

I am extremely
 grateful if you contact me. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 my things by two pay Possible agreement error. The noun 'parcel' seems to be countable, so consider using: "parcels".parcels
parcel
 and you don't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay for this kind of courier service. I would be grateful if you do for me and I would like to give my address and phone number.

I am sincerely
 looking for your response extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
.

Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.EarthMarthaMarathiGarthEarthyBarth
Aarthi