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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect

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To Whomsoever it may concern, The article that your travel magazine printed last Friday about Midweston town, on the cover had immense amount of misinformation. Such posts not only defames the reputation but also gradually degrades the figures of economic growth. The Midweston town, of which I am a resident, does not have a street where you will not find a street light. As a member of electricity board, my daily work routines follows in fixing and making sure there are no dark corners. Another piece of knowledge printed which is not correct is about having a no night life in the town. The town has over 12 night clubs and 5 bars operating overnight under government license however there none of them serves alcohol after 3 in the night. I believe you will read the obligations I have provided in this letter and take action on the checklist. In conclusion, I am, as a citizen of the town, requesting you to kindly correct the article by publishing a note of correction in your magazine. Your's Faithfully, Mary Janes
To Whomsoever it may concern, The article that your travel magazine printed last Friday about
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Midweston
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, on the cover had immense amount of misinformation. Such posts not
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defames the reputation
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gradually
degrades the figures of economic growth.

The
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Midweston
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town
, of which I am a resident, does not have a street where you will not find a street light. As a member of electricity board, my daily work routines follows in fixing and making sure there are no dark corners. Another piece of knowledge printed which is not correct is about having a no
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night life
in the
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town
. The
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town
has over 12 night clubs and 5 bars operating overnight under
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government
license
however
there none of them serves alcohol after 3 in the night.

I believe you will read the obligations I have provided in this letter and take action on the checklist.
In conclusion
, I am, as a citizen of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
, requesting you to kindly correct the article by publishing a note of correction in your magazine.
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Your's
Faithfully
, Mary
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Janes
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect

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  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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