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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter,explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work w2kr
Dear sir I am writing to express my interest to join the birla museum for a part time work as there is a requirement published in a local newspaper. I have recently finished giving my semesters exams and looking ways to keep myself busy doing something productive. I am an avid book reader who loves to read on topics related to history. Museums have always fascinated me to know more about past incidents, which is one of the majot reasons to join for a part time job. I believe to have good communication skills which can help in interaction which visitors. Moreover I am having good knowledge of computers and technology which can be useful in giving technological support in back office operations of the museum. Worling in the museum will help me enhancing my skills further. I am available to work for museum five days a week only during evening hours as I have my French classes in the morning. During weekends I prefer spending time with my friends and family. I would be glad to discuss this opportunity at any suitabke time. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully Ronika Sharma
Dear sir

I am writing to express my interest to
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join
the
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birla
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
for a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
work as there is a requirement published in a local newspaper.

I have recently finished giving my semesters exams and looking ways to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
myself busy doing something productive.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am an avid book reader who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loves
to read on topics related to history.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Museums
have always fascinated me to know more about past incidents, which is one of the
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majot
reasons to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
for a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
job.

I believe to have
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good
communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in interaction which visitors.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Moreover
I am having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge of computers and technology which can be useful in giving technological support in back office operations of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
.
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Worling
in the
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museum
will
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help
me
The verb 'the' is used with an infinitive: "to enhance" or "enhance".
enhancing
my
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skills
further
.

I am available to work for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
five days a week
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only
during evening hours as I have my French classes in the morning. During
The comma is probably missing here: "weekends, I".
weekends I
prefer spending time with my friends and family.

I would be glad to discuss this opportunity at any
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suitabke
time.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully


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Ronika
Sharma
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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