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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell him/her how you found out explain how you feel about the news organise to meet your friend for a celebration.

You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell him/her how you found out explain how you feel about the news organise to meet your friend for a celebration. NXD2
Dear Kiran, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to congratulate you on getting engaged. I found out regarding your ring ceremony on my Facebook news feed on other days. I have seen your images of the function either and both of you look fantastic and stunning. unluckily, I saw your invition on my Facebook messenger only after the day of your ceremony. Hence, I deeply apologize for not being a part of the party. I think you are the last person to get married in our friend circle and I am delighted to meet you soon. However, I told my family about this news, they were also getting excited to meet you. Therefore, I have decided to throw a small get together in the happiness of your engagement. I would appreciate it if you could come home for a dinner party next week with your fiance. I will also invite all our friends with their family. I am sure it will go super to meet you all at one table. I am excited to meet you. I am hoping to hear from you soon. Thanks
Dear Kiran, Hope you and your family doing well! I am writing this letter to congratulate you on getting engaged. I found out regarding your ring ceremony on my Facebook news feed on other days.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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have
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seen
your images of the function either and both of you look fantastic and stunning.
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unluckily
, I
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saw
your
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invition
on my
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Facebook messenger
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only
after the day of your ceremony.
Hence
, I
deeply
apologize for not being a part of the party. I
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think
you are the last person to
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get
married in our friend
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circle and
I
am delighted
to
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meet
you
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soon
.
However
, I
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told
my family about this news, they were
also
getting excited to
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meet
you.
Therefore
, I have decided to throw a
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small
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get
together in the happiness of your engagement. I would appreciate it if you could
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come
home for a dinner party
next
week with your
'fiance' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "fiancé"
fiance
. I will
also
invite all our friends with their family.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am sure it will go super to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you all at one table.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am excited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hoping to hear from you
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soon
. Thanks
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IELTS letter You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell him/her how you found out explain how you feel about the news organise to meet your friend for a celebration.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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