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You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper about helping to improve the environment. Write a letter to the editor and explain, Why you are interested in it, How you can hel, When you are available

You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper about helping to improve the environment. Write a letter to the editor and explain, Why you are interested in it, How you can hel, When you are available jaPy
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to published an advertisement in your newspaper under the title of How to prevent our environment, in Sunday 21 March 2021 edition. Actually, this advertisement really impressed me and I pleased to know that your organization awares the local people to save our atmosphere. I am not only interested to participate in this organized event but I also ready to put my best efforts to success it. Moreover, I do numerous volunteer activities such as planting trees and cleaning public places with one NGO in my leisure time. Therefore, I would like to take part in this coming event. As per advertisement your this program will run for two weeks in our local areas, so me and other volunteers will help to provide tress, garbage bags and protective clothes as per requirement. We can contact with residents and aware them about the importance of nature and its valuable benefits. As I am working in a bank hence I am able to join this program after working hours during the weekdays. However, at the weekends I am ready to spend my whole days with your team members. Kindly let me know how to sign in this event and how many participants can attend it. I look forwarded to hearing from your. Yours sincerely, David Zane
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
published an advertisement in your newspaper under the title of How to
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prevent
our environment, in Sunday
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
21 March 2021
edition.

Actually, this advertisement
really
impressed me and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to know that your organization
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awares
the local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to save our atmosphere. I am not
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only
interested to participate in this organized
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event
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but
I
also
ready to put my best efforts to success it.
Moreover
, I do numerous volunteer activities such as planting trees and cleaning public places with one NGO in my leisure time.
Therefore
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in this coming
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. As per advertisement your this program will run for two weeks in our local areas,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
me and other volunteers will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to provide tress, garbage bags and protective clothes as per requirement. We can contact with residents and aware them about the importance of nature and its valuable benefits.

As I am working in a bank
hence
I am able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
this program after working hours during the weekdays.
However
, at the weekends I am ready to spend my whole days with your team members. Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
in this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
participants can attend it.

I look forwarded to hearing from your.

Yours
sincerely
, David Zane
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper about helping to improve the environment. Write a letter to the editor and explain, Why you are interested in it, How you can hel, When you are available

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  American English
6 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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