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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card ypXM
Dear Sir/Madam, The intent of writing this letter is to inform you that I have lost my student identification card. I am a post-graduate student, currently studying Human Resource Management at ABC college. I vividly remember, I was at the campus yesterday until 5 PM and used my student card to issue a few books from library. However, I was asked for the card today while entering the college premises and sadly I was unable to find it due to which I was restricted to enter the building. Moreover, upon several requests I was allowed to talk with a administrative assistant who advised me to write a formal request to you. Unfortunately, losing my ID has created a huge trouble for me. I am not allowed to attend my classes, sit in the exam or issue any books; which I believe will create a negative impact on my studies, with all the examinations coming up. Therefore, I urge you to issue a new card as soon as possible Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Manushi Shukla
Dear Sir/Madam,

The intent of writing this letter is to inform you that I have lost my student identification
card
. I am a post-graduate student,
currently
studying Human Resource Management at ABC college.

I
vividly
remember, I was at the campus yesterday until 5 PM and
used
my student
card
to issue a few books from library.
However
, I was
asked for
the
card
today
while entering the college premises and
sadly
I was unable to find it due to which I
was restricted
to enter the building.
Moreover
, upon several requests I was
allowed
to talk with
a
administrative assistant who advised me to write a formal request to you.

Unfortunately, losing my ID has created a huge trouble for me. I am not
allowed
to attend my classes, sit in the exam or issue any books; which I believe will create a
negative
impact on my studies, with all the examinations coming up.
Therefore
, I urge you to issue a new
card
as
soon
as possible

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Manushi
Shukla
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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