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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have jaRp
Dear John, I hope you are in good health. I will be attending the monthly training program held in the UK at Grammy Hall on 16 January 2019. As part of this training program I have learned that the course requires one of the participants to organise the social event. I am writing this letter to you regarding my interest in organising the event. I have organised many social events in the past. Some of these events have had more than hundreds of people. Twice I was also awarded a Rockstar award for managing the social events. After seeing my potential and past experience I hope you would consider me a competitive candidate for the post of event organiser. If you feel that I have the caliber to manage such events then please do let me know more details about the events. I hope you will consider my application for the post for event organiser. Looking forward to getting a positive response from you. Your sincerely M.
Dear John,

I hope you are in
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good
health. I will be attending the monthly training program held
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in


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the
UK at Grammy Hall on 16 January 2019.
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part of this training program I
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have


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learned
that the course requires one of the participants to
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organise
the social
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event
. I

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am
writing this letter to you regarding my interest in
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organising
the
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event
.

I have
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organised
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many
social
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events
in the past.
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Some
of these
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events
have had
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more


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than
hundreds of
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people
. Twice I was
also
awarded a
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Rockstar
award for
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managing


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the
social
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events
. After seeing my potential and
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past experience
I hope you
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would


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consider
me a competitive candidate for the post of
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event
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organiser
. If you feel that
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I


have the caliber to manage such
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events
then
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please
do
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let
me know more
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details


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about
the
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events
.

I hope you will consider my application for the post for
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event
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organiser
. Looking

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forward
to getting a
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positive
response from you.

Your
sincerely


M.

IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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