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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have jaRp

Dear John, I hope you are in good health. I will be attending the monthly training program held in the UK at Grammy Hall on 16 January 2019. As part of this training program I have learned that the course requires one of the participants to organise the social event. I am writing this letter to you regarding my interest in organising the event. I have organised many social events in the past. Some of these events have had more than hundreds of people. Twice I was also awarded a Rockstar award for managing the social events. After seeing my potential and past experience I hope you would consider me a competitive candidate for the post of event organiser. If you feel that I have the caliber to manage such events then please do let me know more details about the events. I hope you will consider my application for the post for event organiser. Looking forward to getting a positive response from you. Your sincerely M.

Dear John,

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forward
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Your sincerely


M. 