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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job oGBB
Dear Mr. Editor, I am Urvish Parekh living in Vadodara city. I am writing this letter in the response of the advertised regards of the job in City Museum shop. Currently, I am a student of Engineering field and in the 5th semester. I have read your article in Times Of India on the last weekend regards of the employment notice. After 10 days, I have a vacation as semester break, and I am looking for the job in that period. I have been visiting this museum several times and all the shops and its items are very well-known to me. Furthermore, being a language trainer I have great fluency and command over native language and English. Finally, I have knowledge about almost 4-5 international language thus, during the deal with tourist I do not face any kind of difficulty during a communication. As I am free during this period, I can extra money which I can use as my personal expense. In addition to this, I can add this experience into my resume during the job application which will boost my working profession. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours truly, Urvish Parekh.
Dear Mr. Editor,

I am
Urvish
Parekh
living in Vadodara city. I am writing this letter in the response of the advertised regards of the job in City Museum shop.

Currently
, I am a student of Engineering field and in the 5th semester. I have read your article in Times Of India on the last weekend regards of the employment notice. After 10 days, I have a vacation as semester break, and I am looking for the job in that period. I have been visiting this museum several times and all the shops and its items are
very
well-known to me.
Furthermore
, being a language trainer I have great fluency and command over native language and English.
Finally
, I have knowledge about almost 4-5 international language
thus
, during the deal with tourist I do not face any kind of difficulty during a communication.

As I am free during this period, I
can extra
money which I can
use
as my personal expense.
In addition
to this, I can
add
this experience into my resume during the job application which will boost my working profession.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
truly
,

Urvish
Parekh
.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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