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You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ 15adM
Dear Sam, I hope you are in best of your spirits. This is to inform you that one of our classmates Roger is having his birthday on Tuesday next week. Hence, we are planning a surprise birthday party for him at my residence with few of his best friends. Since this is the last year before we bid adieu to our college, it is more likely to cherish some memories for our great friend, Roger. His birthday was one of the special events which got missed due to incoming semester examinations. There were also some probable moments in which I noticed Roger to be sad and depressed for not celebrating his birthday. Infact he called his friends to his house till last year on his birthday. Therefore, we have planned a surprise birthday party at 8: 00 PM in my residence. As a birthday present you can bring a valuable gift which you think he would like. You can gift him anything which he can use appropriately and effectively. Please be sure you reach the venue on time. Thanks for your cooperation. Best Regards, Paritosh
Dear Sam,

I hope you are in best of your spirits. This is to inform you that one of our classmates Roger is having his birthday on Tuesday
next
week.
Hence
, we are planning a surprise birthday party for him at my residence with few of his best friends.

Since this is the last year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
we bid adieu to our college, it is more likely to cherish
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some
memories for our great friend, Roger. His birthday was one of the special
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
missed due to incoming semester examinations. There were
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
probable moments in which I noticed Roger to be sad and depressed for not celebrating his birthday.
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Infact
he called his friends to his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
till last year on his birthday.
Therefore
, we have planned a surprise birthday party at 8: 00 PM in my residence.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
a birthday present you can bring a valuable gift which you
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think
he would like. You can gift him anything which he can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
appropriately
and
effectively
.
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Please
be sure you reach the venue on time.

Thanks for your cooperation.

Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Paritosh
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IELTS letter You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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