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The Local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of the Council. In your letter · explain why the building is important · suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community · suggest a solution to finance the repairs.

The Local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of the Council. In your letter · explain why the building is important · suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community · suggest a solution to finance the repairs. rql2
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the Local Council’s decision to pull down the old Heritage Centre of Mussoorie. This building has been a historic landmark of our area for over 150 years. It has a huge collection of paintings and artefacts. Most of them were handcrafted by skilled craftsmen who worked tirelessly for the development of our town. The centre used to be a popular tourist attraction, but because of the negligence of the Local Council it has lost its popularity. I understand that the building is in a dilapidated state. Certainly, the proposed software company will generate more employment opportunities for people living in this region. Nevertheless, this progress will be at the expense of losing one of the oldest historic landmarks of Mussoorie. Somehow, it seems unacceptable to me. I believe that the Heritage Centre can be restored and put to good use for the local community. The Council can use it as a community centre or traditional skills learning centre for the locals. As far as the fundraising is concerned, I hope that volunteers would gladly come forward to devote some time for this noble cause. In addition, the Council can contact local companies to donate small funds for preserving this historic building. I hope that the Local Council of Mussoorie reconsiders its decision of destroying the Heritage Centre and finds a different site for building the software company. Yours faithfully, Savan Sharma
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the
Local
Council’s decision to pull down the
old
Heritage
Centre
of
Mussoorie
.

This building has been a historic landmark of our area for over 150 years. It has a huge collection of paintings and
artefacts
. Most of them
were handcrafted
by skilled craftsmen who worked
tirelessly
for the development of our town. The
centre
used
to be a popular tourist attraction,
but
because
of the negligence of the
Local
Council it has lost its popularity.

I understand that the building is in a dilapidated state.
Certainly
, the proposed software
company
will generate more employment opportunities for
people
living in this region.
Nevertheless
, this progress will be at the expense of losing one of the oldest historic landmarks of
Mussoorie
. Somehow, it seems unacceptable to me.

I believe that the Heritage
Centre
can
be restored
and put to
good
use
for the
local
community. The Council can
use
it as a community
centre
or traditional
skills
learning
centre
for the
locals
. As far as the fundraising
is concerned
, I hope that volunteers would
gladly
come
forward to devote
some
time for this noble cause.
In addition
, the Council can contact
local
companies
to donate
small
funds for preserving this historic building.

I hope that the
Local
Council of
Mussoorie
reconsiders its decision of destroying the Heritage
Centre
and finds a
different
site for building the software
company
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Savan
Sharma
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IELTS letter The Local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish an old historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of the Council. In your letter · explain why the building is important · suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community · suggest a solution to finance the repairs.

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