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You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your countr

You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your countr MRj6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest a few corrections regarding an article published in your magazine about my home country India. In your article titled “ India: The homeland of all religions. ”, is very suggestive and conveys an opinion of how my motherland is only about different religions and people practicing them. Apart from religion, India is also a multicultural country displaying diversity in food, clothing, and other activities. Displaying India as an emerging developed nation would seem more appropriate. India is a leading example of a country with a strong educational system as we can find many Indians leading the global markets such as Vice President of USA Mrs. Kamla Harris, Surinder Pichai, CEO of Google, and many more. I would request you to kindly make the needful changes and publish another article about India which is well informed and displays the multiple facets of the country instead of just one. I await your prompt response. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Aarunima
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to suggest a few corrections regarding an article published in your magazine about my home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
India.

In your article titled
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“
India: The homeland of all religions. ”, is
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very
suggestive and conveys an opinion of how my motherland is
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only
about
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different
religions and
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people
practicing them. Apart from religion, India is
also
a multicultural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
displaying diversity in food, clothing, and other activities.

Displaying India as an emerging developed nation would seem more appropriate. India is a leading example of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
with a strong educational system as we can find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
Indians leading the global markets such as Vice President of USA Mrs.
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Kamla
Harris,
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Surinder
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Pichai
, CEO of Google, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more.

I would request you to kindly
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make
the needful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and publish another article about India which is
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well informed
and displays the multiple facets of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
instead
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
one. I await your prompt response.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Aarunima
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IELTS letter You are living in another country and read an article in the magazine regarding your culture. There were some mistakes. Write a letter to the editor to correct 1- what the errors were 2 write correct info 3 suggest another interesting article related to your countr

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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