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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-Speaking Friend. In your letter · explain why you changed jobs · describe your new job tell him/her your other news

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-Speaking Friend. In your letter · explain why you changed jobs · describe your new job tell him/her your other news 7jL2

Dear Monica, I hope you are in your good health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have started working for a new company. I had to change my job because the work had become quite monotonous and there was no scope to grow. I wanted to learn and explore new technology. I had a meeting with my manager about the same but didn't get an appropriate response from him. The onsite opportunities were less and technology was getting outdated. The job market was getting saturated and companies were moving towards new set of technologies. I am very happy with my current role in this organization. They have deployed me on a new set of technology which is Python. It's so amazing to work with it. There are so many new features which makes this technology more attractive and as it is globally known, the job market is too wide. This company will also give me an onsite opportunity in couple of years. My parents are coming over to celebrate this achievement. We have planned a road trip. I am very excited for it. Join us if you are free. Your lovingly XYZ.

Dear Monica,

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good
 health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the work had become quite monotonous and there was no scope to grow. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 wanted to learn and explore You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 had a meeting with my manager about the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an appropriate response from him. The onsite opportunities were less and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 was getting outdated. The job market was getting saturated and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 were moving towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 set of technologies.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 role in this organization. They have deployed me on a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 set of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 which is Python. It's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 amazing to work with it. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 features which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 more attractive and as it is globally known, the job market is too wide. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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couple of
 years.

My parents are coming over to celebrate this achievement. We have planned a road trip. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited for it. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
Join
 us if you are free.

Your lovingly


XYZ. 