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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.

You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. 25Qgb
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter applying for job in the city post office which was advertised in the newspaper. I, Hemant Gala, completed my master’s in the Business Management course from the repute college of Chennai. I have an experience of working as an administrative executive and handling customer complaints in telecommunication office during internship. in last month. During the internship, I have learned niche skills of fluent communication, customer handling and updating records on daily basis with accuracy. Moreover, I have always been interested in working with customer centric processes and post office are the perfect example of handlings so many packages and parcels on daily basis and delivering to the customer with accuracy. This motivates me to apply for short term position at your post office to further leverage my skills and thereby enhance my experiences. Thus, requesting you to kindly consider my application for this position. Let me know further, if any details are required. Looking forward to hear from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Hemant Gala
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter applying for job in the city post
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office
which
was advertised
in the newspaper.

I,
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Hemant
Gala, completed my master’s in the Business Management course from the repute college of Chennai.
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I
have an experience of working as an administrative executive and handling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
complaints in telecommunication
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
during internship.
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in
last month. During the internship, I have learned niche
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
of fluent communication,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
handling and updating records on daily basis with accuracy.

Moreover
, I have always
been interested
in working with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
centric processes and post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
are the perfect example of
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handlings
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so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
packages and parcels on daily basis and delivering to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
with accuracy. This motivates me to apply for short term position at your post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
office
to
further
leverage my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and thereby enhance my experiences.

Thus
, requesting you to kindly consider my application for this position.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know
further
If " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it.
, if
any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
are required
.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you at the earliest.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Hemant
Gala
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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