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An email: A new game Read the email from your English friend, Spencer. I’ve just got a new game on my phone. It’s called SurfzUp and it’s great. What’s your favourite game on your phone? How often do you play it? Why do you like it? Write an email to Spencer and answer the questions.

An email: A new game Read the email from your English friend, Spencer. I’ve just got a new game on my phone. It’s called SurfzUp and it’s great. What’s your favourite game on your phone? How often do you play it? Why do you like it? Write an email to Spencer and answer the questions. x2VGN
Hi Spencer, I'm so glad to hear that you bought a new game for your phone. I'd love you to tell me more about it. Answering your questions, I don't have too many games in my phone. However, my favorite one is about puzzles, I play it every day after dinner time. I really love this game because it let you compete online with people around the worl to be the best. Even though, I don't play too much I enjoy this game a lot. Would you like to meet to play it together? Drop me a line when you have time, Sam.
Hi Spencer,

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IELTS letter An email: A new game Read the email from your English friend, Spencer. I’ve just got a new game on my phone. It’s called SurfzUp and it’s great. What’s your favourite game on your phone? How often do you play it? Why do you like it? Write an email to Spencer and answer the questions.

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103 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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