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You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department.

You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. ElV6Q

Dear Mr. Iyer, I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues that I am facing at the company’s provided accommodation. I, Hemant Gala, working in Finance Department, have joined the organization in last week only. I was allotted the staying option in the company’s township in the officer's block which is having attached kitchen with a fully furnished room along with a centralized cooling system. I am facing multiple issues since the time of allotment of house. Firstly, the cooling system is not working and staying in such scorching summer is completely unbearable. Secondly, there was tripping of electricity yesterday which caused a complete blackout throughout the night. Further, pipes in the restroom and kitchen are continuously leaking. This has caused me lots of hardship in the last couple of days. I am requesting you to change my block at the earliest and ensure that there are is no problem or any issues in that another apartment. Looking forward to your replies along with immediate approval for change in the apartment. Yours faithfully, Hemant Gala

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Iyer
,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues that I am facing at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s provided accommodation.

I, Possible spelling mistake found.Hem ant
Hemant
 Gala, working in Finance Department, have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 the organization in last week This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was allotted
 the staying option in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s township in the officer's block which is having attached kitchen with a fully
 furnished room along with a centralized cooling system.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am facing multiple issues since the time of allotment of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Firstly
, the cooling system is not working and staying in such scorching summer is completely unbearable. Secondly
, there was tripping of electricity yesterday which caused a complete blackout throughout the night. Further
, pipes in the restroom and kitchen are continuously
 leaking. This has caused me lots of hardship in the last couple of days.

I am requesting you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my block at the earliest and ensure that there are is no problem or any issues in that another apartment.

Looking forward to your replies along with immediate approval for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in the apartment.

Yours faithfully
,

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Hemant
 Gala