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You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department.

You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. ElV6Q
Dear Mr. Iyer, I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues that I am facing at the company’s provided accommodation. I, Hemant Gala, working in Finance Department, have joined the organization in last week only. I was allotted the staying option in the company’s township in the officer's block which is having attached kitchen with a fully furnished room along with a centralized cooling system. I am facing multiple issues since the time of allotment of house. Firstly, the cooling system is not working and staying in such scorching summer is completely unbearable. Secondly, there was tripping of electricity yesterday which caused a complete blackout throughout the night. Further, pipes in the restroom and kitchen are continuously leaking. This has caused me lots of hardship in the last couple of days. I am requesting you to change my block at the earliest and ensure that there are is no problem or any issues in that another apartment. Looking forward to your replies along with immediate approval for change in the apartment. Yours faithfully, Hemant Gala
Dear Mr.
Iyer
,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues that I am facing at the
company
’s provided accommodation.

I,
Hemant
Gala, working in Finance Department, have
joined
the organization in last week
only
.
I
was allotted
the staying option in the
company
’s township in the officer's block which is having attached kitchen with a
fully
furnished room along with a centralized cooling system.

I
am facing multiple issues since the time of allotment of
house
.
Firstly
, the cooling system is not working and staying in such scorching summer is completely unbearable.
Secondly
, there was tripping of electricity yesterday which caused a complete blackout throughout the night.
Further
, pipes in the restroom and kitchen are
continuously
leaking. This has caused me lots of hardship in the last couple of days.

I am requesting you to
change
my block at the earliest and ensure that there are is no problem or any issues in that another apartment.

Looking forward to your replies along with immediate approval for
change
in the apartment.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hemant
Gala
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IELTS letter You have recently moved into company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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