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An email: Going to the park You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email: ask Sammy to come to the park with you explain how you can both get there say what you can do there.

An email: Going to the park You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email: ask Sammy to come to the park with you explain how you can both get there say what you can do there. YBEx5
Hi Sammy, How are you? I'd love to meet you to pass a great time together. Would you like to go to the park with me next Sunday? I could pick you in the morning. We could go either by car or bike. Howerver, I think the bike is the better option. What do you prefer? We could eat lunch there. Moreover, I will make your favorite meal. In the afternoon, we can play games such as board games, paint or listen to music. Can I count you in? Drop me a line to know more information, Lisa.
Hi Sammy,

How are you? I'd
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you to pass a great time together.

Would you like to go to the park with me
next
Sunday? I could pick you in the morning. We could go either by car or bike.
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Howerver
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the bike is the better option. What do you prefer?

We could eat lunch there.
Moreover
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your favorite meal. In the afternoon, we can play games such as board games, paint or listen to music.

Can I count you in?

Drop me a line to know more information, Lisa.
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IELTS letter An email: Going to the park You would like to go to the park tomorrow. Write an email to your English friend, Sammy. In your email: ask Sammy to come to the park with you explain how you can both get there say what you can do there.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
98 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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