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undable to attend evening class

undable to attend evening class 8aMBP
Dear Mr. Peter, This letter is to express my inconvenience in continuing the part time evening computer course. The following are my reasons for the unavailability. As you are aware, I am working as a Maintenance technician in a water treatment plant and my job includes day and night shifts. My employer was aware of my part time education, he offered me to work in the day shift. Unfortunately, one of my co-worker met with an accident and I have been assigned with the night shift for the next few months as we are in short of staff. Although, I am unable to continue my education, my employer has promised me that once my colleague is back to duty they will allocate me the day shift. I would like to re- enroll for the course once this over. I hope you are okay with it and Looking forward for your response, Yours sincerely, Aadhil Rahman
Dear Mr. Peter,

This letter is to express my inconvenience in continuing the
part time
evening computer course. The following are my reasons for the unavailability.

As you are aware, I am working as a Maintenance technician in a water treatment plant and my job includes day and night shifts. My employer was aware of my
part time
education, he offered me to work in the day shift.

Unfortunately, one of my co-worker met with an accident and I have
been assigned
with the night shift for the
next
few months as we are in short of staff.

Although, I am unable to continue my education, my employer has promised me that once my colleague is back to duty they will allocate me the day shift. I would like to re- enroll for the course once this over.

I hope you are okay with it and Looking forward for your response,

Yours
sincerely
,

Aadhil
Rahman
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IELTS letter undable to attend evening class

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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