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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Mr and Mrs Henry, I am writing this letter to express my interest in tutoring your children in Hindi language regarding which you had given an advert in the Australian newspaper. I would be a suitable candidate for this post as I have many years of experience as a professor in Hindi language. Apart from this, Hindi is my mother-tongue which will be beneficial for your children as they will get to communicate with a native speaker. I would also like to bring to your notice that I am not only a language expert but also a counsellor. Hence, if your children are going through any problem related to studies or other aspects then I can give them professional counselling. Other than these, I have a lot of free time to spend as I have retired from my job, and also teaching your kids will give me an opportunity to keep myself engaged rather than spending time alone at home. I request you to kindly consider me for this post and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ms. Sruthy
Dear Mr and Mrs Henry,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in tutoring your children in Hindi language regarding which you had
given
an advert in the Australian newspaper.

I would be a suitable candidate for this post as I have
many
years of experience as a professor in Hindi language. Apart from this, Hindi is my mother-tongue which will be beneficial for your children as they will
get
to communicate with a native speaker.

I would
also
like to bring to your notice that I am not
only
a language expert
but
also
a
counsellor
.
Hence
, if your children are going through any problem related to studies or other aspects then I can give them professional counselling.

Other than these, I have
a lot of
free time to spend as I have retired from my job, and
also
teaching your kids will give me an opportunity to
keep
myself engaged
rather
than spending time alone at home.

I request you to kindly consider me for this post and looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ms.
Sruthy
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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