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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to complaint about the worst condition of some of the furniture in one of the rented flat of yours that I am currently staying in America. I am Ratika Arora, one of the tennants in your 45, Plankwodd Road, New Jersey flat situated in northern parts of America. I am staying in this accomodation since past 1 month with my family. I have rented the flat for a time span of around 5 years owing to my work commitments in the corporate I am currently employed in Jersey. I have numerous complaints regarding certain belongings of the house. For instance the beds are quite small for 3 people to sleep comfortably in them. The sofa chairs produce enormous noise when people need to sit and relax on them. The fans need repairing too as they operate at a very low speed even when the regulator of fans are set to a speed of around 5. I would request you to kindly replace the above furniture with the new one so that we can live a more comfortable life. I am also in favour to pay you half the amount that would be chargeg in buying these new equipments for the house. Looking forward to your prompt action and response. Thanking You, Yours Sincerely, Ratika
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing this letter to complaint about the worst condition of
If the text is a generality, ‘of the’ is not necessary.
some of the
furniture in one of the rented flat of yours that I am
currently
staying in America.

I am
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Ratika
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Arora
, one of the
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tennants
in your 45,
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Plankwodd
Road, New Jersey flat situated in northern parts of America.
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I
am staying in this
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accomodation
since past 1 month with my family.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have rented the flat for a time span of around 5 years owing to my work commitments in the corporate I am
currently
employed in Jersey.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have numerous complaints regarding certain belongings of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
For instance
the beds are quite
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small
for 3
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to sleep
comfortably
in them. The sofa chairs produce enormous noise when
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
need to sit and relax on them. The fans need repairing too as they operate at a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
low speed even when the regulator of fans
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are
set to a speed of around 5.

I would request you to kindly replace the above furniture with the new one
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so
that we can
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live
a more comfortable life. I am
also
in
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favour
to pay you half the amount that would be
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chargeg
in buying these new equipments for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Looking forward to your prompt action and response.

Thanking You,

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Ratika

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

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  American English
9 paragraphs
221 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.