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As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Philip Jones. I am a final year student of the Department of Public Service and Tourism in the Yerevan State University. In the framework of social survey project we are planning to organize a group visit to the historical exhibition of Traditional Armenian clothing in Tigranakert. I would like to find out the dates of the exhibition, the working hours of the museum and the group discounts available. First, please be so kind to inform the opening and closing dates of the exhibition. This point is very important for us as we must have planed and spread the advertisement at least two weeks before the event date. Second, provide more detailed information about the historical period the exhibition covers. We would like to present a detailed historical review in our advertisement. Generally, people visiting exhibitions are interested in concrete elements of this or that era. Thus we find it very useful providing as much information about the age exhibited as possible. Finally, we are interested in the group discounts provided. The group attending the event will consist of two classes of seven-grade school students, fourteen and eleven correspondingly in each, four teachers and three accompanying members of our group. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. We hope that our project will have a great success through our cooperation and you help. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Philip Jones.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Philip Jones. I am a final year student of the Department of Public Service and Tourism in the Yerevan State University. In the framework of social survey project we are planning to organize a
group
visit to the historical exhibition of Traditional Armenian clothing in
Tigranakert
. I would like to find out the dates of the exhibition, the working hours of the museum and the
group
discounts available.

First
,
please
be
so
kind to inform the opening and closing dates of the exhibition. This point is
very
important
for us as we
must
have planed and spread the advertisement at least two weeks
before
the
event
date.

Second, provide more detailed information about the historical period the exhibition covers. We would like to present a detailed historical review in our advertisement.
Generally
,
people
visiting exhibitions
are interested
in concrete elements of this or that era.
Thus
we find it
very
useful providing as much information about the age exhibited as possible.

Finally
, we
are interested
in the
group
discounts provided. The
group
attending the
event
will consist of two classes of seven-grade school students, fourteen and eleven
correspondingly
in each, four teachers and three accompanying members of our group.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. We hope that our project will have a great success through our
cooperation and
you
help
.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

Philip Jones.
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IELTS letter As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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  American English
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