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You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting

Dear Matina, I hope that you are doing great! Preparing to our tomorrow’s review meeting I’ve prepared a briefly agenda. Summarising all things that have been done with my participation last year I would like to highlight these several projects: Opening new trading line with China partners; Finishing big state order in Samara; Organizing workflow in the sales Department. Definitely there are still a lot of things to do and for successful completion of current project some changes in working process are to be done. Firstly, it is really necessary to hire 2-3 sales managers as with additional volume our colleagues are heavy with orders. Secondary, I have some concerns regarding our business with China partners. Our lawyers do not have enough experience in international deals. That could be useful to ask for a consultation in the International Chamber of Commerce. To provide the confident deal supporting in China project it would be great to pass some additional trainings in international trading. See you tomorrow. Best Regards, Polina

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.MatingMarinaLatinaMartinaPatinaMatins
Matina
,

I hope that you are doing great!

Preparing to our tomorrow’s review meeting I’ve prepared a You used an adverb (‘briefly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘agenda’) instead of another adjective.brief agenda
briefly agenda
.

Possible spelling mistake. ‘Summarising’ is British English.Summarizing
Summarising
 all things that have been done
 with my participation last year I would like to highlight these several projects:

Opening new trading line with China partners;

Finishing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 state order in Samara;

Organizing workflow in the sales Department.

Definitely there are still
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a lot of
 things to do and for successful completion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 project This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in working process are to be done
.

Firstly
, it is really
 necessary to hire 2-3 sales managers as with additional volume our colleagues are heavy with orders.

Secondary, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 concerns regarding our business with China partners. Our lawyers do not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 experience in international deals. That could be useful to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 a consultation in the International Chamber of Commerce.

To provide the confident deal supporting in China project it would be great to pass This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 additional trainings in international trading.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you tomorrow.

Best Regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.MolinaPoling
Polina