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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job gBdL
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Frank I am Sugandha Sharma, and I am from India. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement from your end published in newspaper to teach your children. I am a Post-graduate student, preparing my thesis topic on various languages. This is my last semester in college, I have been teaching few students after my class for polishing their language as well. I am extremely enthusiastic person, as I mentioned earlier my native place is India, So I can provide various language lessons to your children via online classes as well and this is add-on advantage for them, they do not need to go outside the home to take the classes. Also, I need to showcase my teaching experience in thesis paper for my evaluation of marks. Therefore, this is immensely helpful for me to earn good marks and have a more exposure of this task. I hope my skills will seem to be interesting for you and you will give me a chance to teach your children for polishing of language. Yours Faithfully, Sugandha Sharma
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Frank

I am
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Sugandha
Sharma, and I am from India. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement from your
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published in newspaper to teach your children. I am a Post-graduate student, preparing my thesis topic on various languages. This is my last semester in college, I have been teaching few students after my
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class
for polishing their language
as well
.

I am
extremely
enthusiastic person, as I mentioned earlier my native place is India,
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So
I can provide various language lessons to your children via online classes
as well
and this is
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add
-on advantage for them, they do not need to go outside the home to take the classes.

Also
, I need to showcase my teaching experience in thesis paper for my evaluation of marks.
Therefore
, this is
immensely
helpful for me to earn
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
marks and have a more exposure of this task.

I hope my
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skills
will seem to be interesting for you and you will give me a chance to teach your children for polishing of language.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Sugandha
Sharma

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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