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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job V9oO
My name is Anita Gilbert, and I am from Poland. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published recently in a popular newspaper, in which you have sought for a Polish language tutor in order to teach your children the language. I think that I would be a very suitable candidate for this job, mainly because I have a Bachelor degree in Polish literature. I also have taught Polish to children of 8-12 years of age for almost 3 years which has allowed me to learn a great deal about the behaviour of children and what motivates them to learn. Besides, I can also be a very friendly person with enough patience to deal with the children of any age. Apart from helping your children learn the Polish language, I could also be of assistance in looking after your home and children when you are away. By the way, I want to have this job as it will help me a great deal when doing my Masters degree in Australian and Aboriginal studies next year. I hope you will consider my skills and enthusiasm to let me teach your children the Polish language. Yours faithfully, Anita Gilbert
My name is Anita Gilbert, and I am from Poland. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published recently in a popular newspaper, in which you have sought for a Polish language tutor in order to teach your
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very
suitable candidate for this job,
mainly
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I have a Bachelor degree in Polish literature.
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I
also
have taught Polish to
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children
of 8-12 years of age for almost 3 years which has
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allowed
me to learn a great deal about the
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behaviour
of
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children
and what motivates them to learn.
Besides
, I can
also
be a
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very
friendly person with
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enough
patience to deal with the
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children
of any age.

Apart from helping your
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children
learn the Polish language, I could
also
be of assistance in looking after your home and
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children
when you are away. By the way, I want to have this job as it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me a great deal when doing my
For an academic degree, use "Master’s".
Masters
degree in Australian and Aboriginal studies
next
year.

I hope you will consider my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and enthusiasm to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me teach your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
the Polish language.

Yours
faithfully
,

Anita Gilbert
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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