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Write a letter to a friend that you can't collect from the airport, as you have promised, because of some reason. In your letter -explain why you can't come, -guide them regarding other options to get to your home, -describe the plans you made to show them around when your friend arrives.

Write a letter to a friend that you can't collect from the airport, as you have promised, because of some reason. In your letter -explain why you can't come, -guide them regarding other options to get to your home, -describe the plans you made to show them around when your friend arrives. l2rW
Dear Sarah, I am anxiously awaiting your arrival on Friday morning. I would not be able to come to pick you up at the airport as already planned. Actually, I was planning to take an off on that day but, unfortunately a vital meeting on that day has come up and as I am heading that project, no one else can do the presentation on my behalf. Thus, I am suggesting you other means of reaching my house. One way would be to hire a cab from just outside the airport which is convenient, if you have a lot of luggage. However, if you are travelling light then I suggest you take the local bus from the airport, that would be very economical. I am very sorry for this turn of events. I have planned a lot of things for you when you are here. The Golden Temple at Amritsar and the Taj Mahal at Agra are on top of the list. Then, there are two museums and a lot of shopping centres where you can shop for souvenirs to take back home. Luckily, a wedding in the family is also there which will give you a taste of our rich cultural heritage. Hoping to see you soon. Warm Regards, Kkr
Dear Sarah,

I am
anxiously
awaiting your arrival on Friday morning. I would not be able to
come
to pick you up at the airport as already planned.

Actually, I was planning to take an off on that day
but
, unfortunately a vital meeting on that day has
come
up and as I am heading that project, no one else can do the presentation on my behalf.

Thus
, I am suggesting you other means of reaching my
house
. One way would be to hire a cab from
just
outside the airport which is convenient, if you have
a lot of
luggage.
However
, if you are travelling light then I suggest you take the local bus from the airport, that would be
very
economical. I am
very
sorry for this turn of
events
.

I have planned
a lot of
things for you when you are here. The Golden Temple at Amritsar and the Taj Mahal at Agra are on top of the list. Then, there are two museums and
a lot of
shopping
centres
where you can shop for souvenirs to take back home. Luckily, a wedding in the family is
also
there which will give you a taste of our rich cultural heritage.

Hoping to
see
you
soon
.

Warm Regards,

Kkr
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend that you can't collect from the airport, as you have promised, because of some reason. In your letter -explain why you can't come, -guide them regarding other options to get to your home, -describe the plans you made to show them around when your friend arrives.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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