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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job 6EbG
Dear Mr. John, My name is Rajesh, and I am from India. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published recently in a popular newspaper, in which you are looking for the Hindi tutor to teach your children for a year. I would like to describe about my self that, It's been more than 15 years now in Hindi teaching field at one of the most reputed college in Mumbai. In addition, I have graduated in Hindi literature course in 2004 from Gujarat University along with the same, I have excellent comment in all the way of communication such as writing, listening, reading and speaking. Moreover, I would express you that I am good at children education as well so this would beneficial for school students where I have easy technic to take care. Besides, I am desperately looking for a job in your town as i want to move there permanently in same profession and I promise you to teach your children with excellence. I'll be waiting for your positive feedback on my response. Yours faithfully, Rajesh
Dear Mr. John,

My name is Rajesh, and I am from India. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published recently in a popular newspaper, in which you are looking for the Hindi tutor to teach your children for a year.

I would like to
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describe
about my self that, It's been more than 15 years
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now
in Hindi teaching field at one of the most reputed
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college
in Mumbai.
In addition
, I have graduated in Hindi literature course in 2004 from Gujarat University along with the same, I have excellent comment in all the way of communication such as writing, listening, reading and speaking.

Moreover
, I would express you that I am
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good
at children education
as well
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so
this would beneficial for school students where I have easy
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technic
to take care.
Besides
, I am
desperately
looking for a job in your town as
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i
want to
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move
there
permanently
in same profession and I promise you to teach your children with excellence.

I'll be waiting for your
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positive
feedback on my response.

Yours
faithfully
, Rajesh
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

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6.0
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