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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a long-standing Indian citizen who works as a professor for Chennai University at Chennai. Recently, I read the Hindu newspaper at your advertisement of posting on the Telegu lecture position available. I am writing a letter to express my interest this apply for the job. You are looking for a professor for teaching language to your kids. Moreover, I have experience as a Hindi language professor for the Chennai university campus and a wide range to speak proficiency read, speak, and write. However, students have moderated to easy by learning that language. A couple of months ago, the local families who are interested in learning the Hindi language, and the family situation easily learn the language in a month. Considering those factors suitable for me and prove my knowledge. Furthermore, I can teach a Hindi language and want to job in Australia because I am learning culture and traditional lifestyles. These days, I have extremely perfectly taught all kinds of language skills, but I am Indian citizenship, so I would like to teach other families. Besides, I strongly feel about and could be a great job opportunities chance to an entirely foreign country to prove my skills, and I will have an anticipation wait for your approval. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Ram Krish
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a long-standing Indian citizen who works as a professor for Chennai University at Chennai. Recently, I read the Hindu newspaper at your
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?
advertisement of
posting on the
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Telegu
lecture position available. I am writing a letter to express my interest
The verb 'apply' is plural. Did you mean: "this applies"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this apply
for the job. You are looking for a professor for teaching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
to your kids.

Moreover
, I have experience as a Hindi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
professor for the Chennai university campus and a wide range to speak proficiency read, speak, and write.
However
, students have moderated to easy by learning that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. A couple of months ago, the local families who
are interested
in learning the Hindi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, and the family situation
easily
learn the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in a month. Considering those factors suitable for me and prove my knowledge.

Furthermore
, I can teach a Hindi
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language
and want to job in Australia
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because
I am learning culture and traditional lifestyles. These days, I have
extremely
perfectly
taught all kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
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skills
,
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but
I am Indian citizenship,
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so
I would like to teach other families.
Besides
, I
strongly
feel about and could be a great job opportunities chance to an
entirely
foreign country to prove my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, and I will have an anticipation wait for your approval.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Ram
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Krish
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a copule, who live australia

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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