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Write a letter to your landloard to return your refundable money.

Write a letter to your landloard to return your refundable money. 2lwBx

Dear Smith, I am doing well. Hope you and your family are doing great. my name is Louis Fabian, and you remember me. l am rented on your apartment in 304B at riverside. I lived there for 11 month and left the place last month. I am writing this letter to regard you that you don't refund my payment till now. which, I deposited as a security while signed on an agreement. As, you know I have completed my study and now that I have to came back my home town. I left room in good conditions. Consequently, before you told me that the amount is refundable but you didn't returned it. Even informed you in previous email or you didn't take it seriously. Now, I again asking you to give my money back with a week. Anyway if you are not willing to cooperate with me. I am afraid that I will have to take action against you to decide the matter in a court. I looking forward to your response as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Louis Fabain.

Dear Smith, I am doing well. Hope you and your family are doing great. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 name is Louis Fabian, and you remember me. l am rented
 on your apartment in 304B at riverside. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 there for 11 Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the place last month. I am writing this letter to regard you that you don't refund my payment till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhich
which
, I deposited as a security while signed on an agreement. As, you know I have completed my study and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 came back my home town. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 room in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 conditions. Consequently
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that the amount is refundable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you didn't The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "return"return
returned
 it. Even informed you in previous email or you didn't take it seriously
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I again asking you to give my money back with a week. Anyway if you are not willing to cooperate with me. I am afraid that I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take action against you to decide the matter in a court. Did you mean "I'm looking", "I am looking", or "I was looking"?I'm lookingI am lookingI was looking
I looking
 forward to your response as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Yours Sincerely
, Louis Possible spelling mistake found.FabienFabianFab ain
Fabain
. 