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You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager.

You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. r1mwJ
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to this letter to apply and also know about more information of advertised part time job vacancy in your company. I need to inform you that, I have previous three years work experience in the hotel industry as a Kitchen supervisor. In the job role, I managed all types of kitchen related job responsibilities under both peak and off-peak situations with monitored 35 members. In addition, I have completed international kitchen management professional course in 2019. In parallel, I achieved the three-star professional level of kitchen management certificate. According to the advertisement, I want to know about what are the work responsibilities and the job duties during the working environment. Moreover, I need to know about job rules of the working hours as well as additional working hours for that mentioned time period. If we allocate for job duties, what are the additional rules of working with the permeant workers and managers. Please be kind enough to response in this matter. Yours faithfully, Chanaka Ranatunge
Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing to this letter to apply and
also
know about more information of advertised
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part time
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job
vacancy in your
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company
.

I need to inform you that, I have previous three years work experience in the hotel industry as a
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Kitchen
supervisor. In the
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job
role, I managed all types of
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kitchen
related
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job
responsibilities under both peak and off-peak situations with monitored 35 members.
In addition
, I have completed international
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kitchen
management professional course in 2019.
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In
parallel, I achieved the three-star professional level of
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kitchen
management certificate.

According to the advertisement, I want to know about what are the work responsibilities and the
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job
duties during the
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working
environment.

Moreover
, I need to know about
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job
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rules
of the
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working
hours
as well
as additional
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working
hours for that mentioned time period. If we allocate for
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job
duties, what are the additional
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rules
of
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working
with the
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permeant
workers and managers.

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Please
be kind
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enough
to response in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Chanaka
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Ranatunge
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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