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You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather

You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather W53bW
Dear Nuwan, Hope your family is doing well in the unusual weather condition in your resident area. I am writing to this letter to know your condition in the unstable situation. I would like to express my regret on this happened you have faced. I have no idea about your actual situation at the moment from your side as well as your area. I hope it goes away soon. In my experience. I have faced the same problem at the end of the year 2019. We faced a lot of problems like no electricity, food shortage as well as communication interruption as a family. But we successfully faced all types of problems in the bad weather condition. In addition, volunteer relief teams soon arrived in our area to help those in distress. Brother, you should carefully use stored foods at the moment and please must store mineral water in this case. Moreover, if you have faced a problem, you should immediately call 911 to request help. So, stay safe with your family. Best Regards, Chanaka
Dear
Nuwan
,

Hope your family is doing well in the unusual weather condition in your resident area. I am writing to this letter to know your condition in the unstable situation.

I would like to express my regret on this happened you have
faced
.
I
have no
idea
about your actual situation at the moment from your side
as well
as your area.
I
hope it goes away
soon
.

In my experience. I have
faced
the same
problem
at the
end
of the year 2019. We
faced
a lot of
problems
like no electricity, food shortage
as well
as communication interruption as a family.
But
we
successfully
faced
all types of
problems
in the
bad
weather condition.
In addition
, volunteer relief teams
soon
arrived in our area to
help
those in distress.

Brother, you should
carefully
use
stored foods at the moment and
please
must
store mineral water
in this case
.
Moreover
, if you have
faced
a
problem
, you should immediately call 911 to request
help
.
So
, stay safe with your family.

Best Regards,

Chanaka
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IELTS letter You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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