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You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather

You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather W53bW
Dear Nuwan, Hope your family is doing well in the unusual weather condition in your resident area. I am writing to this letter to know your condition in the unstable situation. I would like to express my regret on this happened you have faced. I have no idea about your actual situation at the moment from your side as well as your area. I hope it goes away soon. In my experience. I have faced the same problem at the end of the year 2019. We faced a lot of problems like no electricity, food shortage as well as communication interruption as a family. But we successfully faced all types of problems in the bad weather condition. In addition, volunteer relief teams soon arrived in our area to help those in distress. Brother, you should carefully use stored foods at the moment and please must store mineral water in this case. Moreover, if you have faced a problem, you should immediately call 911 to request help. So, stay safe with your family. Best Regards, Chanaka
Dear
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Nuwan
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Hope your family is doing well in the unusual weather condition in your resident area. I am writing to this letter to know your condition in the unstable situation.

I would like to express my regret on this happened you have
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have no
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about your actual situation at the moment from your side
as well
as your area.
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I
hope it goes away
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soon
.

In my experience. I have
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the same
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problem
at the
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end
of the year 2019. We
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faced
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a lot of
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problems
like no electricity, food shortage
as well
as communication interruption as a family.
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But
we
successfully
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faced
all types of
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problems
in the
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bad
weather condition.
In addition
, volunteer relief teams
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soon
arrived in our area to
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help
those in distress.

Brother, you should
carefully
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use
stored foods at the moment and
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please
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must
store mineral water
in this case
.
Moreover
, if you have
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a
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, you should immediately call 911 to request
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help
.
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So
, stay safe with your family.

Best Regards,

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Chanaka

IELTS letter You have recently heard that a friend of yours has had some problems as a result of some unusual weather

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