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You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address. NVJrW
Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings of the day. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been holding a savings account in your bank for 10 years and I had to get shifted to Kolkata from Hyderabad in a promotional transfer. I have started working here, but the savings account is still active at your bank. It is being very difficult to know the updates, queries and transactions, as the statement copies are posted to my old address, by which it is giving me zero knowledge about my account status. Therefore, to rectify this issue please change my mailing address details in the account to my new address where I’m residing now, so that I may receive the mails and I also request you to arrange to send the post which have been sent to the previous address. The mailing address is xxxxxx, xxxxxx, xxxxxx, Kolkata. Please respond to the earliest, which will be very helpful. Yours faithfully, Praneeth Raj.
Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings of the day.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been holding a savings
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account
in your bank for 10 years and I had to
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get
shifted to Kolkata from Hyderabad in a promotional transfer.

I have
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started
working here,
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but
the savings
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account
is
still
active at your bank. It is being
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very
difficult to know the updates, queries and transactions, as the statement copies
are posted
to my
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old
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address
, by which it is giving me zero knowledge about my
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account
status.

Therefore
, to rectify this issue
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please
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change
my mailing
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address
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details
in the
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account
to my new
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address
where I’m residing
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now
,
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so
that I may receive the mails and I
also
request you to arrange to
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send
the post which have been
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sent
to the previous address.

The mailing
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address
is
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xxxxxx
,
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xxxxxx
,
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xxxxxx
, Kolkata.

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Please
respond to the earliest, which will be
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very
helpful.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Praneeth
Raj.
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IELTS letter You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

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  American English
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161 words
6.0
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