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Write the invitation letter to the party

Write the invitation letter to the party pLw62
Dear Sir On behalf of the school, we would like to invite you to our Memory Day that be held on the 9th of May 2020 at 8. 30 pm onwards on your school campus. At the event, cultural programs dance, singing and drama will be performed by our pupils. Our honarable guests Mr Kurendra Kha, Mr Tadjayev Mirathy and Mr Anirudh Agarzwall will distrubute prizes and sertificates to the pupils. We have also arranged a delicious dinner at 10. 00 pm at this event. We sincerely hope thatyou will be able confirm your attendance at this invitation on or before 7 th May 2020 by contacting us at 913453346734 or emailng us at zufer@gmail. com. We look forward to your presence on the Memory Day. Yours sincerely
Dear Sir

On behalf of the school, we would like to invite you to our Memory Day that
be held
on the 9th of May 2020 at 8. 30 pm onwards on your school campus. At the
event
, cultural programs dance, singing and drama will
be performed
by our pupils. Our
honarable
guests Mr
Kurendra
Kha
, Mr
Tadjayev
Mirathy
and Mr
Anirudh
Agarzwall
will
distrubute
prizes and
sertificates
to the pupils. We have
also
arranged a delicious dinner at 10. 00 pm at this
event
. We
sincerely
hope
thatyou
will be
able confirm
your attendance at this invitation on or
before
7 th
May 2020 by contacting us at 913453346734 or
emailng
us at
zufer@gmail
.
com
.

We look forward to your presence on the Memory Day.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Write the invitation letter to the party

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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