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Writing the letter thanking them for the invitation and sayong why you will be unable to attend

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Dear Josh, I take this opportunity to appreciate you for inviting you to your birthday party this coming event. I’ll travel to attend my cousin’s wedding in Chicago with the rest of my family members. Please accept my apologies. We’ve been longtime buddies, and I would have attended the party were it not for the wedding. I’ll invite you for dinner once I’m back to make up for the event. I wish you happy moments on your great day. With much love, Jessica
Dear Josh,

I take this opportunity to appreciate you for inviting you to your birthday party this coming
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event
. I’ll travel to attend my cousin’s wedding in Chicago with the rest of my family members.

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Please
accept my apologies. We’ve been longtime buddies, and I would have attended the party were it not for the wedding. I’ll invite you for dinner once I’m back to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
.

I wish you happy moments on your great day.

With much
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love
,

Jessica
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IELTS letter Writing the letter thanking them for the invitation and sayong why you will be unable to attend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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