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The letter for my friend

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Dear Lucy How are you! Ihope you are very well. I have got so much to tell you that I dont knowwhereto begin. I have got a problem and I need your advice. My parentswill not let I go on holiday as they want I to study for my exams. Next week my friends want to be going to visit beach. I want to go because I have never been there. But i have got my exam nextweek. Please let me know what you think I should do. Love Muno
Dear Lucy How are you!
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Ihope
you are
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very
well. I have
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got
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so
much to
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tell
you that I
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dont
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knowwhereto
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begin
. I have
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got
a problem and I need your advice. My
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parentswill
not
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let
I go on holiday as they want I to study for my exams.
Next
week my friends want to be going to visit beach. I want to go
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because
I have never been there.
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But
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i
have
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got
my exam
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nextweek
.
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Please
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let
me know what you
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think
I should do.
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Love
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Muno

IELTS letter The letter for my friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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